wind was breezing in thier hair. the boat to orbis had 3 more minutes ’till they would get there. “ahh, the old outdoors. what can’t it do?” said james. “uhh, james, we have been in the outdoors for a while. we fight monsters, in the outdoors. i think we get enough” zach said back to james.
~where bill was training~
“haha, nice buffoons. please don’t kill me. i have nachoes! oh wait, monsters hate nachoes. uhh, can someone help me please!!!!!!!” yelled bill. he had been surrounded(can’t spell) by buffoons. with out the other 3, he had to train on weaker monsters. but it looked like he would die, when a man, a very young man, came and killed them all with explosion. “yo, man your a little weak by youself here. i think you should go back to orbis and kill lucidia! they are a little easier for you” “ok then” he said rushing up to the portal. “haha, sucker. looks like a i got a map to myself!” he boomed.
~back to the boat~
“one minute untill we get to orbis” said the co-captain. “hey! i can see orbis form here!” said james “well duh, he said 1 minute” said alex. “oh yeah” he replied back. once they were in orbis, they got antoher ticket to ellina. they boat was already there, and the boat was packed! there were weak people, strong people, and weird people. “7 minutes untill we take off” yelled the captain “looks like we came 2 minutes early!” said zach relieved(cant spell) once they took off, most people rushed into the cabin for saftey. but the 3 stayed outside. 12 minutes passed and they were just sitting, playing around with their bows. then a dark boat came with balrogs flying out. everybody used thier attack. after the fight, james was severly injured, alex was intact, and zach’s arm was bleedy badly. “james, zach! i will heal you. i just don’t know how!” “ju..st……” then james just sat there, eyes closed. “here i will drinkk my potions, and give some to james. man we should have listened to bill!” said zach, drinking his potions. he opened james mouth, then pooured it into his mouth. his eyes were still closed, and he didn’t budge. “this is more serious then i thought!” said alex. 5 minutes later, they were at a hospital in ellina. “is he going to be alright?” said alex. “yes he will live. but, he will be in the hospital for a while.” the doctor said back to him
to be continued…
again, nobody replies
man everyone hates my stories
Use some capitalization for once
Anyway nice story, for word you dont get, get a dictionary.