hehe, this is again a new story i am to make. plz don’t flame me for spelling errors or grammar errors, just tell me how to spell it or ect. well heres the story

life was great. james,zach,bill,and alex had a great life. it was easy of how they had their lives. it was train, re-pot, and sell and buy. james,zach, and alex were all rangers, while bill was a hermit. they trained on bufoons getting greater drops each day. they were millionaires. but yet, they wern’t to famous. they all wanted to, but with a extremly strong cheif bandit named kyle was the most famous. he maxed all his skills. and he was followed everywhere. “sigh” thought james as he killed a bufoon. “why can’t i be that famous” he thought again. they all lived in many different places. james lived in orbis. zach lived in henesys. bill lives in lith harbor. and alex lives in kerning city. alex was to be convinced to be a cheif bandit, but turned it down and became an archer. “you know what?”said james. “we should do something to kyle. hes been rotten to us, and we should play fire with fire. we should just do something. i dont know yet, but we should do something!” james said proudly “well no. thats not to smart. he is very strong, and if he found out we did something, he would kill us in an instant” said bill. “but im tired of him. he trashed my place and said it was an accident. he also killed my father in a huge fight. well, not much of a fight. he was jist walking to the store, and he came out of no where and killed him on purpose. i want to do something!” yelled james steamed. then tears started coming out of his eyes. “bill, i dont know what you’re thinking. he bought my house without even asking and it wasn’t for sale! so i had to buy a different house wasting my money. and while i was collecting my potions, he came and knocked them out of my hands and stole them. hes a criminal, and i know hes a theif as a title, but when he accutaly steals stuff, it isn’t neccisary, we should do something about him, hes a jerk!” said alex.”alright then” said james whiping his tears. ” we will go to kerning city and kick some dirt on him!” yelled james “come on guys!” “im not leaving” said bill “he know just about everything and he has guards at his house. i wouldn’t go, so thats why im not. so have fun dying!” said bill “ok then bye” said alex. “man im sorry for you guys. he hasn’t done a thing to me, but if he does something to my friends hes going down. and so wll his house!” yelled zach as they went to the station. “hi can i have 3 tickets for orbis?” “yes but im sorry: the boat to orbis is broken. it might take a few hours to rapair. you can feel free to help. oh and that ill be 30k.” he handed her 30k and and just watched the boat being fixed. “well this sucks” said alex. “hey can you help me please!” yelled a worker dangling from the back of the boat. “help help!” he yelled louder. “oh my, we have got to save him!” said alex. “oh damit, we probably won’t get there fast enough wthout bill!” said james. “well yes we can do it without bill! we still have his haste!” said zach, dashing on the boat “hey you can’t get on the boat its still being fixed!” zach ignored him and came to the back of the boat. “please help me!” he said “i got ya!” he replied. “grab my hand” said zach trying to save him. he let go but was caught by zach. “thanks man!” said the worker as zach pulled him up “no pproblem!” he replied to him. “i should tell everyone about this!” he said running off!

well that was chapter one! hope you liked it XD