*ugh* I hate this game sometimes, today I had gotten 30% (decent) so I decided to head back to town to put the zombie teeth I had gotten onto my mule. When I went to go back to zombies I forgot to put my magic gaurd on before I went there, I ended up getting owned by a pepe yeti’s, god I hate those -_-. I ended up going down to 24%!!! I was pissed so I went back, WITH MAGIC GAURD ON, and owned zombies intill I was at 27%. What happened next made me kick myself so bad. I decided to go get a drink, i even rushed because I knew there was cold damage. Stupid me forgot I was poisoned though (I dont cure poison since I,m a cleric) and ended up coming back to a screen with a tombstone on my caracter -_-“. 23%!!! ZOMGwhatBBQ!!! Well dont worry I made the exp up, I,m now back to 30% but I could have been at 40% >=|. Unfortunatly its my fault and I,ll take it like a man =.

Hmmm, now to what I really wanted to do, MY STORY !!! Well here is a sample of the beginning, tell me what you think! Please and thankyou’s

~Cable

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I could smell the salty sea miles under me as I passed over Victoria on my way to Ossyria. The wind was very gentle that night, not a cloud in the sky, and a moon that was full and radiant as ever. Nobody else was aboard the giving me all the peace and quite I needed to gaze upon the stars. “What a perfect night” I thought, unfortunately it wasnt. I spine chilling howl had filled the air. I jumped to my feat within second looking around, searching for what could have made such a frightening noise. My eyes had been fixed to a ship that had pulled up right next to mine, I analyzed it and saw no passangers aboard. Looking more closly I had relised who the ship belonged to. My face went pale just thinking about it. The Crimson Barlog! I stood there, staring at the ship that warned me about my death. I tryed to move but my legz felt like they had been turned to stone. I then remembered I had the cabin, its protected with a very powerful magic for just these emergencies. I sprinted to the cabin door as fast as I could, hoping I still had time to make it to safety. I was too late though. An incredibel tremor knocked me right off my feet and onto to the floor. I looked up to see a pair of red glowing eyes beaming right at me. I froze, I knew it was to late, it was over. I fell to my knees as it raised its hand and with one swipe took away everythin I had worked for…

I awoke sweating and gasping for breathe. “What a nightmare!” I looked out my window to see a prefectly sunny day out side, the birds were chirping and the cicadas singing. “Oh no!!!” I had forgotten that I was supposed to leave to Maple Island noon, I quicly turned around to my alarm clock showing 10:27 AM. I relieved myslef with a sigh, I had plenty of time to make it to the ship. Its a good thing I had packed the night before though or I would have never made it. I went to the bathroom, brushed my teeth, and quick made breakfast. While eating I started to day dream. I couldnt belive that I was 18, finished school, and most importantly I finnaly get to begin my adventure! I put my plate in the sink and looked at the clock, 11:00 AM. “Time to go!” I got my stuff and walked to the door, my parents werent there to say their good byes to me since it was summer and they had to work but they left a not on the door that said…

Dear Cable~

Were truely sorry that we cant see you as you go on your journey but we just have so much work that must be done. Just promise that you will come back to us, we will miss you dear.

Good luck ;D
Mom & Dad

I blussed a bit, I was sad that they couldnt come to see me but I knew that they care about me. I put the note in my pocket and continued my way out the door. Out side I felt the rays from the sun beat down upon me. “Today is gonna be great!”I then raced down the dirt path to the harbor were my adventure would start…