Ok so I decided to write my first story on MMO. I’ll see where this will take me. It won’t be perfect or anything…So please tolerate D:

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“YOUR GONNA REGRET EVERY WORD YOU SAID TO ME ON THIS DAY”, Andrew pulled his backpack out from his closet and ran for the door. His face showed a mix of tension and anger. Slamming the door behind, he was set out to Kerning.

“I’d like to go to Kerning City” Andrew murmured as he jumped into the taxi. The long wait from Henesys to Kerning gave him some silent thinking. He was confused on what will happen to him if he won’t return to his home.
“100 mesos” yelled the taxi driver as the mobile hulls to a stop. Andrew pulls out his bag of coins and stare at them for a minute.
“Hey, Kid! Do you have the money, no?” Andrew lifts his head and disappointedly handed him the bag of mesos. He unleashed a sigh as he walked off the cab. “100 mesos down, 300 left to go” Slowly walking down the street he reads the store names. “Famous Pharmacy, Pawnshop, Chinese Food Restaurant, and- Fusion Bar Jazz…I’m a little thirsty…I’ll take a small stroll and get a drink.”
Walking inside cautiously, he sees about 20 people in the room. Andrew sits near the counter and asked the bartender. “2 red potions, please.” “I’m sorry, we only got white ones left” ” Ohh ok….then I’ll take one” Another guy rushed in and sat next to him. “Six bottles of white potions to go” He turns and sees Andrew. “Sup, my name is Chris” “I’m Andrew” They began talking to each other when Chris starts wondering. “Hey you got a minute? I need you to help me move something”

“I guess” Andrew said. “Let’s go to the alleyway” The twosome walk from outside the bar and into the alleys. “So what did you need help getting?” Chris gave no answer “Chris you there? What are you getting?” Chris stops to a point where no one was around. “I need help getting your money” Chris turns around pulling out a dagger and trapped Andrew into the wall.

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So….what do you think? o.o opinions and constructive criticism is welcome, non constructive are assassinated <.<