Guess this is the next chapter.
Chapter 3
He looked at his younger self. Bodies of bowman lay around him, his face still full of tears. Then warriors and magicians appeared at the door, and charged. A flash of light later and bodies and blood lay on the floor. Then everything flashed white, as he saw himself a week later. He was standing over his friend’s graves. Flowers lay next to each of them. Young knew what he was looking at. The day when he lost his friends, his past life, and became a lone sin….
He woke up to a dark room. He slowly sat up, only to be pushed back down, Laura’s arm around his waste.
“What a wierd girl”, he thought, as he slowly removed her arm, and crept out of the room, pain shooting at his side. He walked outside, looking up at the night sky. The stars seemed very bright tonight. He carefully, went back inside, and crept into Jay’s room. Jay and Kai were sleeping soundly, Jay snoring very loudly, with Kai’s head on his chest. He moved like an Assassin, and took Jay’s Maple claw. It wasn’t much, but he would get around. He walked outside, only to have a young woman follow him.
He looked to his left, nothing. He looked to his right, nothing. Where were the monsters? They usually came out at night. He decided, if they weren’t going to come out, he was going to go after them. He used complex handsignals for his Haste spell. As the finally handsign came into place, sudden pain rushed to his brain, and he doubled-over. He tried getting up, but he found himself immobilized. Suddenly a Green mushroom appeared in his vision.
“Atleast it’s only 1” he thought, but he spoke too soon. 1 green mushroom became 3, which became 10, and grew into an army. He stood up, ignoring the pain. He wasn’t in a good position… Suddenly magic claws crushed many of the green mushrooms as Laura appeared from the group.
“I thought you were going somewhere”, she said. Young stood up, and with Laura’s help, finished off the group.
“I didn’t need your help”, he said crossly.
“O yeah and you were soooo not going to die from green mushrooms”, she said with a bit of anger in her voice. He tried to forget it and walk back, when pain smacked him to the floor.
“Want some help”, as she extended a hand. He grabbed her hand as she pulled him up. Then suddenly, he fell. He was so tired, and he was in so much pain. She saw him fall to the ground, and she grabbed him before he hit the floor. “Boys”, she whispered, as she pulled him over her shoulders. She entered the hotel, came into the room, and laid him down. Then she laid down and fell asleep immediatly…
Sorry about the feeling of rush, my computer is going offline and I needed to post this chapter.
Great man really nice story. Judt make it a lil longer and becareful of the puntuations and such.
You kinda took my Old sin’s name (LonerSin) I deleted him btw nice story
wow nice blog hopefully chapter 4 comes soon =)