Once long ago there was a land called Maple Story. On it there were 4 classes, the archer fun and thoughtful, the warriors brave and couragus, the magicians brave and intelegent and last but not least there were the thieves hiding in the shadows.

Our story begins when 2 young boys and 1 girl were walking in the forest talking,
“So what are you going to do when we get back the Ellinia?” asked the girl, who’s name is Safira (AKA saffy)
“I dunno, you can become the magician you always wanted to be” said the boy closest to her who’s name was David (AKA dave)
“What!?, i thought we were going to perion first!” exclaimed the 2nd boy, Jacob.
“No i thought you said we would go to ellinia first!” said Saffy,
“Oh all right!!” said Jacob with a gloomy look. They started to walk faster, then faster, then a sprint all the way to the ship to victoria island. Once they were looking up at the ship they were all dumfounded at its small size,
“Woah, thats small!” exclaimed Dave.
“Well of course it is boy!” said the captain, Shanks.
“this is only a 5 minute journey from here to victoria Island” he said with a grin,
“ALL ABORD” went a big booming voice. The 3 kids walked onto the boat and saw 6 of there friends there.

——————————————————3 MINUTES LATER—————————————————

Dave was bored and he wanted to do something right NOW. So he walked onto the deck of the boat and started to walk up the ramp. He looked behind him to see if Saffy was watching him. Saffy was looking the other way
“Darnit” said Dave under his breath. He was at the tip of the boat when he yelled
“SAFFY LOOK AT ME!” then just when Saffy turned Dave fell off the boat and into the abyss

TO BE CONTINUED

Hope you liked the 1st part of my story, The next are coming out after i get back from school.
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