Hi, my name is Ben (Benji’s the full first name Xp) and I am new to MMO Tales. I’ve read a lot of good stories here and I’ve decided to write a few. It might suck though XD.
I woke up early in the morning, at around five o’clock. I figured it was just my average day so I changed into my dark scorpio set and wandered off in the outskirts of my home town, Orbis. When I arrived at the park, I saw my best friend Max just sitting on the wooden bench.
Me: Hiya Max. What are you up to?
Max: Oh hi Ben, (sigh) just hanging around here.
Me: Oh, I see. So… You want to go to El Nath with me?
Max: Sorry pal, I got other things to do and attend later.
Me: Ok then, bye.
As I went down the long stone tower of orbis, there was a new statue that I had recently noticed. I slayed a few monsters along the way and before I knew it, I was already halfway down. There was one thing that changed here. It was colder that usual. A lot colder. Finally, I had arrived at the snowy fields of El Nath, but it seemed more like blizzardy fields. I could barely see anything in this storm! It’s even worse than fog. Suddenly, out of no where, a pack of Jr. pepes attacked me. I tried to kill them, but there were just too many of them. Trails of fresh blood were left behind by me as I crawled my way to El Nath. Soon enough, the deadly and bothersome Jr pepes left me lying down on the slippery and icy path. Blood stained my scorpio clothes and the ice stung my wounds. I clenched onto the last of my steelys.
Me: Just a few…. more st……
I became too tired to move and fainted.
When I woke up, I found myself in a hospital full of people. I was in bed, and someone was beside me. It was a girl. She was beautiful; she had long brown hair, and a cute smile. She was holding a sapphire slain. I suddenly noticed a piece of the Jr pepe’s beak was stuck in one of my wounds and it stung real bad.
Unknown girl: Good, you’re awake.
She left a red bean porridge on the table beside me and left. A cleric came by.
Me: Umm… Excuse me, who was that girl?
Cleric: Oh, she was the one that rescued you when you fainted.
Me shocked) I fainted?
Cleric: Yes you did, in the snowy fields
I wondered why she would rescue me. I mean, I don’t know her. I started to blush. Could this be love?
part 2 will come out soon
Welcome to mmo, and this story is good, but your going a bit too fast.
The story’s intresting so far, but try to make it longer
Good start, welcome to MMO Tales.
-Yun
hi Ben =p
Its a pretty good start.
longer, more detail, but good start, keep going