Yay! The first chapter is out!
On an early morning, I woke up, and bounced off the bed so fast that Chika, my pet Cargo, nearly fell off my bed. He growled in response. I didn’t care. I put my old, worn pair of Cargo Wings on him, and he tried to get them off, but unsuccessfully. I pulled on a pair of Dark Stealer Pants and Dark Silver Stealer. Chika waddled over to my hat rack and got my Black Guise. I smiled at her and thought, why not bring Chika? She’s quite obedient. So I put her on a leash (much to her dismay) and I was ready to go to the Café to have a date with my girlfriend, Christine.
I grabbed the neatly wrapped present I got her, which was a Clover Ring. I spent a lot of money on that, and I got it for her because I hoped it would bring me luck. I quickly scribbled a note on a pad on the fridge for my mom to know where I was. I slipped into my Black Snowshoes. I grabbed the Reef Claw which hung over the door, just in case there was an emergency.
Let me fill you in on my past: When I was 5, my father abandoned me and my two younger siblings on someone’s doorstep. The somebody would be my mother for years to come. After we stumbled in, she invited us to stay, which we graciously accepted. She was the co-owner of the potion shop. My step-dad, her husband, was the famous owner of the pharmacy in Kerning City. You might have heard of him. His name is Dr. Faymus.
So as I walked along, Chika’s leash in one hand, Christine’s present in the other hand, and Reef Claw tucked snugly under my arm, I thought, hey, why not fly? So I picked Chika up from the ground, powered up my Jetpack, and flew over to the café.
I was actually quite early. Christine wasn’t even there. I nervously shifted from one foot to another, attracting peoples’ attention with Chika, who was doing tricks. Some older ones tossed me a few coins. I was grateful for the little money I had after buying her present-.-‘’
I met her at the front door. I asked her, “What took you so long, baby?” She laughed and playfully slapped my cheek. “Silly boy, up and nervous in the morning just for a date? You must have something special for me,” she nudged at the package in my hand. “You’ll see when we get in.” We smiled and kiss each other lightly. I felt like singing Cascada’s Everytime We Touch, for goodness sake. Her little Brown Kitty, Suko, pushed between us and so did Chika.
When we got in, we ordered some Cheesecake, Corn, Grape Juice, Unagi, and Watermelon. When she asked for the gift, I brought it out with shaky hands. I was thinking, what if she doesn’t like it? Will it shatter our relationship? Will she like it? But I was all wrong about her not liking it. When she saw what it was, she squealed and hugged me, “I’ve been wanting this ring for ages! Thanks so much for getting it for me!” I was so happy that time, I couldn’t even eat when they brought the food to the table. She said, “I have something for you too…” When I opened it, I couldn’t even express how happy I was. There was a Halfmoon Zamadar waiting for me in the midst of all the gold wrapping paper. I couldn’t wait until I could use it. I held it for a second, then dropped it, swearing. “What’s wrong?” She asked worriedly. “It burns my hand to hold it. I think that happens when you aren’t skilled enough to wear it. I’ll be okay.” But she wasn’t convinced, so in the end she healed me. She closed her eyes and whispered a silent incarnation. This heavenly green light surrounded us, and for that 30-second period, all I felt was her healing hands grasping onto my hand.
When she was finished healing, she opened her eyes and said, “That was the best healing I’ve ever done.” I was so happy that I didn’t see the dark shadowy figure, waiting at the window for me…
TO BE CONTINUED.
Sorry about the 2 identical pictures of a mage. I posted wrong. The first one with the cargo is the main character. The girl with the Brown Kitty is Christine, main character’s girlfriend. The last 2 pictures are of the Dark Figure at the window…Oooo…spooky…
You have a pretty good intro! keep up the good work ^^
Nice i love love storys
this is very good. keep on going! but i cant say that ive ever seen someone fly except for hackers . and here are some typos:
“incarnation” is supposed to be “incantation”
and i find it a bit amusing when I see someone singing “everytime we touch” in a so called “MS time period” =D all in all, it’s a very good story line