El Nath, Ossyria
Alexei Stukov walked into the Chief Resident of El Nath. Today was the day that he would become a Ranger and conveniently his birthday. He held the Necklace of Wisdom in his hands, ready to present it to Rene, the Third Job Instructor for Bowmen. As Alexei passed the Necklace into Rene’s hands, he felt a surge of power as a golden aura surrounded him.
“Congratulations, you are from now on a Ranger,” congratulated Rene, “I hope you will use your newfound powers wisely.”
“Thank you, Miss Rene,” Alexei said.
Alexei had always been a Gentleman. He was famous with the ladies all throughout Victoria and Ossyria for his looks. Almost every girl ever born thought of him as Prince Charming, hoping that he would whisk them away. For once, just once he hoped to find a girl who doesn’t drool all over him. As he walked out the door, he saw a girl sitting alone on the swing set just outside of the Residence. He admired her beauty, beautiful curved hair and a cute face. Next to her laid her Asianic Bow. She looked blankly at the sky, wondering what was going to happen to her.
A Bandit came into view. He bore a Kandine and a Seclusion Wristguard on his hands. He wore a Black Pao top and Black Studded Pants. On his feet were a pair of Black Snowshoes and a Black Gaia Cape. A Silver Identity rested on his head, covering his messy Astro Hair. His large yellow eyes beckoned irresistibly at girls.
“Congratulations on becoming a Ranger Alexei,” the Bandit said, bearing a smile on his face.
“Congratulations on becoming a Chief Bandit Jake,” I responded.
“Not yet. I’ve still got to hand in the Necklace to Arec.”
“Then hop to it.”
He used his Haste Skill and jumped to the door. I walked up the steps and looked at the swing set, finding the mysterious Archer Girl gone. I shook my head back into reality and went into the Residence. A few moments later, Jake was surrounded by a golden aura, signaling his promotion to Chief Bandit.
I decided to quit writing my other series due to lack of inspiration. Maybe I’ll continue writing it another time. Who knows?
it was ok [in my opinion]
This is good.
Might be just me, but instead of screamed, wouldn’t beckoned be a more fitting term? Imo. D:
Andand. In the title, isn’t it supposed to be deafening?
PS I apologise for my ‘nitpicking.’
I thought this was Iepiat’s blog. Haha
Defeaning wut? o_O
Stukov? Didn’t Duran kill him?
-=The Nazgul=-
He’s been. . . RESURRECTED! 😮
Y dunt you lik my story Azn?
Eden! >:0
@Eden: I did.
You could’ve made this more interesting, , . meh, but I liked it.
I’ll try to make it interesting.