Ahem, Sorry about the new series but the last one didn’t turn out really good. So I hope this one is better. Oh and when you see * <–that, it means a thought.
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“Damn, this is painful. Who would’ve thought dying was so painful?” “No Jack, don’t talk like that! I won’t let you die.” It’s no use Jane. If fate wanted me to die here to stop this war then so be it!” “No!” Jane shouted throughout the battlefield, with tears streaming down her cheeks. “Why?why me?!” “Jane I have one request before leaving. I want you to give this to your son and tell him daddy loves him. Jack reaches for his pocket, then in an instant a sword pierces through Jack’s stomach. Jane slowly turns her head around.
There stands a dark creature with a sinister smile on his face. “You’re next” he said licking his lips. “Jane” Jack said, I guess this is the end huh? It’s been good since I married to you. Now is the time I say Good-bye. Please leave now.” “But Jack-” “No! leave now. I will try and hold this guy as long as I can. NOW LEAVE!!” Jack got up when Jane left. “Prepare to die, Kent.” “Ohhhhh?”
-Flashback over- Jane flash jumped throughout the battlefield slicing each one who stands in her way. In her mind right now is to avenge Jack. It kept going about in her head. Jane stopped in front of a castle like house, large enough to fit about 20 families. “So you’ve finally arrived?” Jane didn’t answer. “Very well then, prepare to die then.”
Jane slowly opens her mouth “you’re the one who’s going to do here.” “We will see about that” with his back still turned at Jane. With a sinister grin he disappeared.
-Ten Years Later- “Boy am I tired” “Tell me about it. Wanna go home and call it quits for the day, Cloud?” “Dirge. I’m going to the park for a while. So see ya!” The next instant Dirge was left alone.
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Ummm…. good enough? I hope you guys like it.
Speech for each character should be placed in different paragraphs.
What he said.
Looks good *goes to read others*