(from previous chapter)
Jake, please proceed to Magic Academy on the next ship tomorrow morning, something bad has happened.
We both looked at head other, Really, I was more worried than him.
“Want to come with me, or you want to stay here?” He asked, “it’s safer to stay here” He added
“Don’t think you can ditch me!” I pinched his nose “I’m definitely going with you” I smiled. read more

“Wait here” Jake whispered into my ears, I looked into him, seeing such anger and determination together not to mention frustration. I nodded.

He started to run up to the three guys, on the way, it’s like he clapped his hands together, and pulled them apart, revealing that beautiful and powerful thorns.
He suddenly threw up something that looked like a piece in his training room. Ahhh, yes, the magic rock. It suddenly shattered like into a million pieces, then, from behind his back, it was like he summoned an angel!
He raised his thorns into the air, and the angel behind him clapped her hands together, and froze those 3 thiefs.
He then teleports back to me and puts his arm around me. I just blinked.
“That was fast.” I mumbled, he smiled at me.
“I think we’re finished here.” Jake said to the Dark Lord. The Dark Lord took a deep breath.
“For now you are!” He shouted, then he disappeared.
“C’mon, let’s go, there’s somewhere I want to take you.” He grabbed my hand and leaded me off.
When we finally managed to get out of that Dark Tunnel, I saw many dark trees.
Jake grabbed something from his pocket, it was like a small map. He looked at me, I don’t know why, but he kept smiling at me. Then, I could suddenly feel my body grow lighter.
My head started to hurt, it started to spin and spin. I felt so dizzy, then suddenly, I was in mid air, because I could even realise where I was, I started falling. Falling from the sky.
“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I screamed, throwing my arms frantically around.
For what seemed like ages, I fell on some wooden log, and fell back onto a sail. Could this be where my journey began? I looked around, I wasn’t so certain, so I reached into my pocket for the world map. Blinking twice, and making sure, I looked at the compass, then I was certain, Yes, I was at Victoria Island. read more

Well, this was suppose to be in a comment, but Darkwar4ever kinda spammed the whole place, and I wanted it readable so everyone can read it.

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I want to say, that’s not the way to go.

In Life, everyone chooses their own path, from robbers, to thieves, to cleaners, to bosses, it’s their own choice.
I quote as you said
“not all hackers are bad” WELL DUUUUHHHH, how dumb can you get? Ofcourse their not bad, they’re living people too, BUT it’s their thoughts that are ruining the game. I mean,
you said hacking saves you time,
Let me ask you read more

“Don’t force me. I don’t want to kill you” Jake said seriously
“HAHA, you mean you CAN’T kill me” The stranger said in a challenging voice. I could see Jake’s eye filled with anger. He teleported up a tree, then I lost sight of him. Sudden he appeared in front of this stranger and aimed a sort of transparent arrow, then teleported to the back on the stranger watching the arrow flow through his body, seeing the stranger fall down onto the knees and soon onto the ground. read more

Okay, so i suck at writing in the present tense.From now on, Pick up the pieces sha’ll be written in the past tense. xDD
Okii
Thank you to
Rain and Shatred for giving me critism to imporove my story, although the crap from english school are so annoying.
Anyways, just so ya’ll know.

Also, thanks to everyone else who like my stories. :DD
Thanks for all your support. read more

“Here’s you’re hot chocolate honey” he smiled bringing me my hot chocolate.
oh my gosh! He just called meHONEY I don’t want to bring up my hopes, I know he’s calling me that because he cares, not because he has anything towards me.
“Let me see that wound on you’re knee again” He offers
“sure” I pull my ripped jeans up to my knees, he put his hand overs it and mumbles a spell of some sort, I don’t know if I was seeing things, but I could see green sparkles, I don’t know what to call it, they were just beautiful. After awhile, he took his hand off my knee and fell onto the floor breathing heavily.
“oh my gosh? Are you okay?!” I asked worried
“I’m fine” he smiles “Sometimes it happens when mana goes down” he smiles again re-assuring me
“umm, O-Okay, if you say so.” I smiled.
“So, what are you planning to do?” He asked me
“My parents probably wouldn’t want me back” I said sadly, staring at the ground. The thought of my parents made me sad. read more

Lol, nobody believes me,
here’s the proof, There really IS microsoft works.

Characters:
Mommy: (req: nothing)
Daddy: (req: nothing)
Main character wiz/cleric boy (Jake): (req: over level 40 and look hot.)
Main character girl (Sasha): (req: over level 35 must have the nx *blush*)
Grendal: (req: over level 48 mage or cleric)
King of magic school: (req: over level 58 mage of any kind)
Queen of magic school: (req: over level 55 mage of any kind)
Dark Lord: (req: over level 50 thief of any kind)
Granpapa: (req: warrior over level 40. preferably level 50.) read more

before you read this, this is a rant. I must warn you. If you hate moaning and groaning people, please leave xD

I was flicking through some blogs, and I’m certain that most of the blogs that i saw should’ve been in the forum.
Waffles, I hope you don’t mind (if you do, say so and i’ll delete it xD)

it’s been said soooo many times read more

Okay everyone, I can’t seem to finish one single story. From “Choose between me or her” to “Why won’t you understand me” to “The life of a princess” to “destined to be”

Although all have made it to the front page, I just couldn’t find the motivation, or the inspriation to carry on.

BUT NOW
I have completed a WHOLE STORY. not just ONE chapter, but the whole story!!!
*hears crowd cheers* read more