New Dawn Prologue (Memories)

New Dawn – Prologue (Memories)
Note : This is a love/war fanfic like most fics.
Disclaimer : If this fic makes you ball your eyes out, roll on the floor laughing, become sentient, kill you from being over gasped due to suspense, OR ANYTHING YOU DONT WANT IT TO. DONT BLAME ME >:l

Ehem.. Sorry its short, I just couldn’t find a way to make it long because its all memories.
Prologue (Memories) :
Two children were playing at a park together. It was a boy and a girl. They didn’t have a care in the world about what was happening, All that mattered was that they were happily playing together. Suddenly, The earth shook. “Mommy!” Asked the girl, “What was that?”. “…” The mother didn’t know what to say so she shook her head and whispered “I-I don’t know” She stood up and said “It’s getting late, We should go home now dear”
“OK Mommy!” Replied the girl happily. As the family walked off, The boy simply sat there and waved goodbye. He had no family, His parent’s had died from a tragic accident when he was around two years old. He and the girl had been playing together at the park for almost a week now, He was alone. He merely covered himself up in sand and tried to sleep. The next day was diffrent though, Before the girl left to go home, Her mother had went up to him and asked “Are you alone?”. The boy nodded yes before letting out a tear. The girls mother was shocked, But she asked him softly “Do you want to come with us?” The boy just sat there. He was amazed at how she cared for him. NOBODY had cared for him. At least as far as his memory served. He brushed away his tears and attempted to say the words “Yes please” But they didn’t quite come out right. He was only three years old at that time. Two years younger than the girl that he played with at the park. The mother noticed this and giggled at his attempt, After all, You couldn’t expect much from a three year old.

Months went by, And just as the boy said, He was alone. But now, He had a happy family that had taken him in, and raised him.

Years went by, And the friends bond grew stronger untill that one fatefull day….

“Whoah!” Said the now around 14 year old boy. The floor was vibrating. He looked outside to see what was the source of it. Rolling down the street was a tank. A BIG tank. The colonel opened the tanks hatch, took out a megaphone and annouced that everyone 13 and over would have to participate in the war. ‘What?’ Thought the boy, Lith Harbor had always been so peacefull, They Lithians had never been exposed to a war. The colonel ordered everyone with a knowledge of combat to come out of their houses to register for the army. Since the friends had been training in the arts of magic, They had no choice but to be recuited. The boy had chosen the path of a cleric, To be able to cure his friends on the battlefield if needed, And the girl had majored in Ice and Lightning, Because she never felt right “poisoning” a person.

Ax…xel…..Xel….Axe….el….AXEL!
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End prologue. Sorry about the sad opening, But I think I did a good job. Tell me if you like it ^^

8 thoughts on “New Dawn Prologue (Memories)”

  1. Woohoo, it’s out.

    I’d post chappa 7, but Tea made me swear to wait. D:

    -claps-

    And yay! Anima! FINAL FANTASY!

  2. You have a weird habit of capitalizing the first word after commas, among other things. That’s not necessary. Other than that, an okay beginning, I guess.

  3. It’s just a prologue, Its in 3rd person because its memories, And well (I was bored). Ill try to fix capitalizing after commas, It’s just, Well, ITS A HABIT >< Next chapter will be better, And I’ll fix up things like that. Thanks for reviews.

  4. Prologues are important. Since it’s a prologue it doesn’t make a difference from the chapter. From my point of view they’re the most important because you have to get every 1s attention or no one reads. Length really doesn’t matter. . . and yeah. . . Just helpin

  5. Mmmm, Ill take those points, But what’s done is done. I’m still proud of myself though, to make that with the somewhat-short attention span of mine. Chapter one will be much better than this.

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