Pick up the pieces, chappii 2

“Here’s you’re hot chocolate honey” he smiled bringing me my hot chocolate.
oh my gosh! He just called meHONEY I don’t want to bring up my hopes, I know he’s calling me that because he cares, not because he has anything towards me.
“Let me see that wound on you’re knee again” He offers
“sure” I pull my ripped jeans up to my knees, he put his hand overs it and mumbles a spell of some sort, I don’t know if I was seeing things, but I could see green sparkles, I don’t know what to call it, they were just beautiful. After awhile, he took his hand off my knee and fell onto the floor breathing heavily.
“oh my gosh? Are you okay?!” I asked worried
“I’m fine” he smiles “Sometimes it happens when mana goes down” he smiles again re-assuring me
“umm, O-Okay, if you say so.” I smiled.
“So, what are you planning to do?” He asked me
“My parents probably wouldn’t want me back” I said sadly, staring at the ground. The thought of my parents made me sad.

“It’s okay, why don’t you come to magic school with me.” He smiled again that warm kind smile.
“Can I? I mean I would love to!” I say with joy, but also slightly blushing.
“Well, should I teach you a little bit of magic?” He asked
“ Yes please!”
He takes me by the hand and shows me into a wonderful room which he calls his training room. It just left me in awe, it was just spectacular. He grabs me by the hand, and put me in front of a wall filled with colourful rocks. He calls these magic rocks. Jake tells me that in this room, everything magic you do, your mana points won’t go down, as those “Magic rock” act like healing mp potions.
He grabbed me, and pulled me into a circle surrounded by candles, suddenly he mumbles a spell and all of the candles lit up.

“Hey, wait. I probably don’t know much, but I know you can heal, but how can you use fire? Through tales, I’m certain you can only stick to one.” I asked slightly raising an eyebrow.
He laughed a little; he told me that he happens to be the only person in the whole academy of magic to be able to do that. Jake explained to me in great detail that his parents are the head of Magic School. I could feel my hopes go down, knowing that I probably will never be perfect enough for him.
Without anymore comment, he held my hand and mumbles something I couldn’t quite hear, I could just feel weaker and weaker, but at the same time, stronger. It was quite a weird feeling to describe. I felt pain throughout my whole body, from head to toe. I let go of his hand and fell to the ground, I just couldn’t take it anymore. I could feel myself falling slowly. It my mind, it felt as if I was falling through a dark tunnel. It was like I was alone, like it was midnight. Suddenly, everything disappeared and I fell into Jake’s arms.

“You okay?” He asks with full concern
“Y-ye, I think so. I don’t know actually, could be please tell me what happened?” I ask eyes full of questions.
“Magic school will teach you all the attacks, I’m trying to focus on your defence. It’s called Magic guard, I think we should give it a rest for today” He smiles.
I smile back, but I felt so weak to say anything back, I slowly closed my eyes, feeling my strength going down each second.

I wake up to the sound of Thunder and lighting. I quickly sat straight on this bed. Suddenly, I hear that noise again. I jump out of bed, and open the curtains. All I see is blue sky, white clouds and a beautiful day. That’s weird, I was certain I heard Thunder. Maybe I’m just hearing things? I shook off the uneasy feeling. I called for Jake.
“Jake. . . Where are you?” I repeat this question around the whole house, I walk to the garden and saw Jake and this weird guy, I couldn’t make out the face because this guy’s bamboo hat covered it. I called Jake’s name.
“Jake? What are you doing?” I asked, thinking it was no big deal.
“Quick! Run back inside!” He shouted, but it was too late, the stranger makes eye contact with me, and I see these really scary and sharp items aim towards me. I felt a very sharp pain on my left shoulder.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I screamed as tears of pain flow down. No more tears could come out as I was more scared because 3 more sharp things comes flying towards me, pinning me onto a wall. the stranger runs fast towards me and holds something shaped like a knife but not quite under my chin, resting the knife on my shoulder, pointing towards my neck.

“Leave the girl out of this, it’s between you and me!” Jake shouts.
“HAHAHAHA, should I? You’re soooo right, it’s between you and me Jake, the girl has nothing to do with this. Let me just kill her so w-” He stranger laughs.
“NO!!” I tremble at the thought of this. Feeling hopeless, I had not learned any sort of magic, so I don’t know what I should do.
“P-P-Please! Let mmme go!! I beg you!” I looked at the stranger as tears flow out, down the side of my cheeks.
“How about. . . NO.” He smiles “A HAHAHAHAHAHAHA”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
And again, some may be in past tense, but ahhh, MK (microsoft works) can’t pick up tense. T.T
Hope you like it!

10 thoughts on “Pick up the pieces, chappii 2”

  1. Try using Microsoft Word.

    It picks up EVERYTHING.
    Til the point where it gets annoying, but it works REALLY well.

  2. @Shatred;
    my computer came with Microsoft works, and my mum’s computer microsoft word, but my mum’s computer’s microsoft word is in chinese, and my mum refuses to buy me microsoft word when i have works. And when i tried downloading it from downloads.com well, i recieved i virus, which stuffed my computer up, which made my mum more furious, so I think I’ll stick with microsoft works. T.T

  3. Some of it was kinda confusing but the storyline was awesomee 😀
    Okay here’s something that might help.

    You said:

    “umm, O-Okay, if you say so.” I smiled.

    Correction:

    “Umm, O-okay, if you say so,” I smiled.

    Put a comma instead of a period before you say the speaker unless it’s the end of the sentence.
    Also if it’s an exclamation or a question, you put a ‘!’ or a ‘?’

    I hope I helped.

  4. lol Microsoft Word is annoying! (fumes about whenever I write Ellinea, it thinks the word is wrong)
    lol Happy New Years ^^

  5. smidiot said: “lol Microsoft Word is annoying! (fumes about whenever I write Ellinea, it thinks the word is wrong)
    lol Happy New Years ^^”

    Ehehehe, I write my stories purely in Notepad. It loads up quicker and doesn’t annoy me with all these “incorrect words” like “Freinz” or “Feldman”. ^^

Comments are closed.