THIS CHAPTER IM GOING TO TAKE A BIG RISK. I making the next few chapters have more action than romance too because people seem to like action more.
I looked around the bottom of the tower. I saw little penguins that kept on running back and forth on the platform. I shook my head and jumped down to the snow field. The others were ahead of me. Another gust of wind came and it made my bones freeze. I tore open my backpack and got an extra jacket. It didn’t help all that much.
“Come on Toshiro! You’ll freeze to death out here!” Jenny was yelling from across the field. I saw Dan laughing and running to the lodge. I used haste to get past the penguins and get to the lodge. I saw everyone huddled up against the fire, so I went up to talk to them.
“Hey guys, let’s go grab some rooms, before the other kids get the good ones.” I suggested. Dan nodded and stood up. We walked to the counter together and asked for a room.
“Room for two please” I asked.
“Same goes for me” Dan added. I looked at him.
“I thought we were going to share a room” I said. Dan smiled and looked back. I looked back to and saw Jenny and Maria. “Ooohhh no, you know I may like her and all, but I cannot share a room with her!” I tried to whisper, but it turned out to be a quiet yell. Dan started walking to Maria, I tried to stop him, but it was too late.
“Hey Maria, I was just wondering, er, you want to share a room with me?” Dan asked. I sighed and kept watching of what she would say. She smiled and took Dan’s hand. They started walking together to their room. Man you’ve got to be kidding. Please be a joke, please be a joke, but it wasn’t. Jenny grabbed my arm; she was looking at me with a worried face.
“I, um, well, how do I say this. Want to share a room with me?” I tried to smile. Jenny started to giggle and she nodded. I let out a big sigh of relief and grabbed my stuff.
AFTER UN-PACKING AND ALL THE OTHER STUFF
“Hey guys lets go up to the mountains and do some snowboard or skiing or whatever” I said.
“Yeah, I guess that would be fun” Dan said. So Jenny and I raced to our rooms and grabbed our gear.
“Hey remember to bring your stars” Jenny said.
“What? Why?” I started throwing questions at her.
“I guess you weren’t listening. The instructor said to keep weapons with you at all times.” Jenny sighed. I grabbed a sack of tobis and ran up to the mountain. Dan was already there, I saw his Olympus strapped to his back.
“Hey come on, I’ll race you down the hill” Dan grabbed his board. It had a design of a zombie mushroom on it.
“Bring it on! Hey let’s make it so anything goes. You can attack each other and use skills, alright?” I said. Dan nodded and we got on our boards.
“READY? GO!”
“Haste!” I yelled. I started zooming past Dan and all the trees. I looked back and started to grin. He gave me a grin and started taking out his bow. He used arrow bomb and I fell down. I tried to get back on my board, but I was stunned by the skill. I saw Dan laughing as he passed me. I gritted my teeth and raced back down the hill. I got a star out and threw it at Dan, but missed. Dan beat me to the finish line. When I made it I tackled him and we both started laughing.
“How cute, to little boys wrestling!” I looked up it was Rory.
“Hey leave us alone, and there won’t be any trouble” I said.
“But what if I want trouble” He grabbed his dagger. I looked at Dan and he gave me a blank stare.
“Fine, but lets not do it here, to many people are watching. You wouldn’t want them to watch you get your butt kicked!” I taunted him. We walked into the forest, Dan following me from behind. I grabbed a tobi with my left hand. (He’s left handed)
“Come on let’s see your Avenger, Toshiro. Or are you to scared that it will hurt someone?” He kept edging on to me. “Come on, don’t be a wuss! There’s no one here besides you and me. Oh that’s right, you don’t want to waste your energy and faint like you did on the boat!” Rory gave me an evil grin. I focused my energy on the tobi and it turned into an Avenger star.
“Finally you make the Avenger! I don’t think you even deserve it though. I mean I’m surly the better fighter. You’re the one who wants peace” He kept on taunting me.
(ATTENTION HERE COMES A BIG RISK. YOU MIGHT HATE IT OR YOU MIGHT LOVE IT, PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR OPINION ON THIS)
I grabbed another tobi with my right hand this time. I focused all my energy into the tobi, and it turned into an avenger. I looked at Rory, he looked shocked.
“Who’s the scared one now huh?” I shot back at him.
“So what you have two huge stars at hand” he said.
“Then bring it!”
Rory rushed at me with haste and tried to stab me. I spun and dodged it. I used haste and dark sight to get far away from him. I still had my stars at hand. I threw one at him and it cut his shoulder. Then the star hit the tree and it turned into a tobi again. Rory was running up to me and I threw the 2nd avenger. It missed, badly. I could feel my energy fading away. Rory came up to me and slashed me on the chest. I looked at Dan he was running to get help. Rory kicked me in the stomach and I hunched over.
“That’s right! Bow down to your master.” Rory kicked me again and I fell over. I took out a tobi and threw it at him. He jumped back. I took this time to keep throwing stars at him. He kept on dodging them. My energy was almost gone. I took out one more star. I focused my last bits of energy into the star. The star turned into a huge avenger. It was bigger than normal avengers were. Rory was rushing up to me. I threw the star and it stabbed him. Rory fell right at his tracks. I coughed out some blood and it stained the white snow, dark red. I fell against a tree. I had cuts and bruises everywhere, and I could’ve sworn my ribs were broken. I saw Dan and Jenny running up to me. There was green everywhere, then all the colors were mixing up. Green, white, black, red. Then I blacked out, again.
Man I really have to stop making him black out. Anyways please click the “I liked this blog” if you did. Please give me comments about the two avengers, and everything else. I noticed that my ” I like this blog” were going down. o_0 But I hope this chapter will raise it back up again. THANKS.
weeell i thought u were going to have toush do a shadow partner XD! that would mess it up.
LOL hella nice story MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe or me kill u jk jk jk lol anyways hella nice story me likey
i thought it was pretty good =),cant wait untill the next one comes out =)
ROFL, It was nice. Once again PROOF READ! VERY IMPORTANT
“How cute, to little boys wrestling!” TWO, not, to.
You have great creativity ^^
~Looking Forward To your next Chapter ~
– VanillaPocki –
sweet, u should stop making him lose to Rory
It was nice, even though you black out all the time, it gets boring, and you make people think that every time he uses avenger, he will black out, and even if he doesn’t black out, it wont surprise us eather, since you have already told that you were annoyed by it.
Eventually, you could make Rory get a third job skill, so that he could pick up another fight, and beat him up that way! >=D
Or you could just ask the third job instructor abaut him knowing a third job skill.
‘*EverydayHero*’
I like romance. . .
i like the part where you summoned 2 avengers, it was awesome
MAKE MORE
Lol windiachick hahaha
i like romance too, =/
Lol, uh ok. I guess I can do a little more romance, Hmm I don’t know where I’m going with this story. OH NO WRITERS BLOCK! NOOOOO
hav him finish his 2nd advance skills, and have him go through sum krazi cave of trials, then end up meeting 3rd job master, then hit 3rd job finalli, , then imput a quest, make him go into sanctuary possibly, kill a jrog, or a couple macis or spears, get sumthing krazi rare, and return it to sumwun who gives him a krazi sacred star or sumthing in return, just a couple random ideas, =)
– from a definite fan,
i love your maple academy stories plz write more of em i cant wait for the next one!
~ a crazed fan of ur maple academy blogs
BIG avenger ^^ yay!
i think shadow partner, or meeting the 3rd job adv would be cool, or throwing 3 stars at once
Roey is a biatch
I don’t know, I want this to be different and be a little more creative than just meeting the 3rd Job guy and killing balrogs. I’m going to see what happens.
DON’T YOU DARE! DON’T MAKE HIM FIGHT MONSTERS ALL THE TIME! That’ll get too boring. Trust me, what makes this story unique is the fact that the main charachter doesn’t fight monsters 24/7, and with a bit of romance thrown in, it makes a good story. Oh and I liked the part with the action, but make sure you don’t COMPLETELY cross out the romance, because you’ll lose a LOT of fans because of it. Write as fast as possible.
~A great fan, greater than everyone else =)
That Was Great I Was Hafl-WAy Done When My DAd Stoped Me From Reading -.- Anyways He Lefted Ande I Finished Reading IT WAS AWSOME If You Ever Stop Writing I Would Feel Sad T-T Anyways 10/10
Your stories are great, sorry I havn’t been readng em. well, Im back to reading em.
Great, always great stories from you. that’s what i expect!