WOW I CAN’T BELIEVE IT. I MADE ANOTHER ONE! I’m so sorry I didn’t make one earlier. Just to let you know I’m going to end this soon. Yeah I know, I don’t have a lot of time to write this stuff sorry. IF YOU HAVEN’T READ THE OTHER ONES FIRST PLEASE READ THOSE BRFORE THIS ONE.
After a few silent moments, which seemed like hours to Shane, he got up and stared at the boat dock. Chris and Jenny looked at each other and nodded. Chris put his hand on Shane’s shoulder. “If your going I’m going too” said Chris. Jenny nodded with him. Shane looked at his friends. He smiled, he as lucky to have such great friends. “Ok then we head next thing tomorrow morning!!!
Shane practically destroyed his closet looking for all his best armor and stars. He looked has equipment. 1 Meba, 1 addy avrice, 3 sets of kubis, 4 sets of icicles, 2 sets of tobis, and 1 set of steelies. He took steelies at hand, and but everything else in his backpack.
Jenny clenched her arrows. She smiled she had hundreds of them, ready for anything. She took a bunch of unagi meals just for this trip. She wanted to bring her best friend home. It tore Jenny’s heart when she heard the Jessie was leaving to El Nath. She took her bow, and slammed the door shut behind her. She met up with Chris and saw he had his Doombringer and a few extra two handed swords that she couldn’t make out because of the morning Ellinia fog. Chris smiled at her and gave her a friendly “hi”. She shyly said her greetings back to him. They headed towards the dock to meet Shane.
They all met up at the dock and quickly got tickets. They went on the boat and impatiently waited for the boat to move. Someone else had come on the boat. It was a mage, and by the looks of his burns, he was a fire mage. He had a cheerful grin and said his greetings. “Hi, my name’s Arturo! Are you guys going to fight the balrog?” Shane looked down and told him if any monster stood in his way towards El Nath, he would kill it. “El Nath? I thought that place was destroyed!” said Arturo. Shane, Chris, and Jenny all looked at him in shock. “Didn’t you here? Some priest girl went off to destroy the Zakum, but then as soon as it was summoned, it got out of control and destroyed the whole snow city. Now it’s not a city, but a lava covered hell!” Shane didn’t believe his ears. There was a big crash, and the boat lifted up form the dock. Arturo saw that his companions looked down. “But don’t worry!” he said hastily. “Not all of it may be true! And of course someway, it got exaggerated!” Shane didn’t listen he was just thinking. “Did you say a priest girl?” asked Chris. Arturo nodded. “Hey Shane, that might’ve been Jessie!”
Shane looked up with eyes wide open. There was another crash. They all ran outside and saw the dark ship. It was the Balrogs!!!!!
You know I didn’t really like that ending, but yeah I had to give you something. I hope you enjoyed this!
It was very cool . Had a tad of suspense. i really enjoyed it ^.^
cool. it is ok, um i give it 8/10. its not, forgive me, as good as the other ones.
welll when r u gonna write 7?