Yay the fifth one is finally out! Sorry it took so long. I had a writers block plus I didn’t have a lot of time to write it. Well anyways, here you go!
Shane didn’t want to think about her. He wanted Jessie out of his mind. Shane tried to push the thought away, but he couldn’t, he couldn’t stop thinking about that day, the day she left……
(I should just stop it here but I’ll be nice ^_^)
HOOOOOOOOOONK! The boat was ringing its 5 minute warning. Shane, Jessie, and Chris were at the dock. Chris said his last good byes and headed back towards Ellinia. Shane took Jessie by the hand. (Romance for those of you who complain -_-) “Shane, I have something important to tell you”
“What, like your leaving to Orbis isn’t enough for me?” replied Shane.
“Yeah, well there’s more to that Shane! So listen up!” Jessie scolded. But then she quickly looked down. “ I don’t think we should be together anymore…”
There was silence between the ex couple. 3 minutes left.
“Why!” asked Shane.
“I don’t know…” replied Jessie “I might be gone for a really long time…” Since I’m going to El Nath”
“I still don’t understand why you just don’t stay here with our friends, and me….”
2 minutes left. “Shane I have to go! You know how picky the ticket girl gets!” Jessie then gave a kiss to the ex boyfriend. Jessie ran onto the boat. She dared not to look back. Shane still looking at the ground tried to keep his tears in. He finally looked up to the fading boat. He didn’t wave, or yell, or say good bye, he just stared. But just then there was another ship. A dark black one, with spikes covering it. Three big flying monsters came out, the balrogs. Shane ran to the ship, but stopped at the edge of the dock. He looked back up. The balrogs were throwing dark balls everywhere. He could see Jessie casting shining ray left and right, up and down. But the balrogs wouldn’t give up. Just then the balrogs fused one big dark lightning attack. The ship blew into fire, and was sinking lower and lower. Shane was silenced at this. The ship blew up and all the passengers including Jessie, were sent flying………..
Woot I loved that story, and what a good cliffhanger! Hahaha I’m so mean! Well anyways I hoped you liked it. Please rate again 10 being best, 1 being worst thing ever! Oh and can you check out my blog about motivation? I really need some for my 43 cleric. You can even post it right up here actually. I need motivation for my level 43 cleric. I’m kind of getting bored. -_- THX
Anbu pwns
9? It was pretty good. ANBU NO PWN! (JK) Cow PWN.
11? Continuee i must procrastinate~
do they respawn?
Kevin2007, this is not a story of what auctually happens in maplestory. this is a kinda re create if maple were real life, ya knw what i mean?
7/10, others were better but this one needed a better ending
9/10 man, I need to no more like what happened to the characters after that.
9/10 man that was good i have to admit. better and awesome and nice to read. please do carry on. = )
10/10 a good story,
ya i really like this story too