All right, just as some of you know Ice Covered Road to Dreams is now over.
For those who haven’t read the series missed any chapters, let me know in an mmotales mail and I’ll see what I can do. 
Now, I know people may hated the series or loved it. I want to hear everyone’s thoughts on the story, the characters, the plot, etc.
You can list your favorite character, scene, chapter, etc. Or what you hated about the story :3
All flames, comments, praise, suggestions, etc are welcome. 😀
[P.S. About the sequal to Ice Covered Road to Dreams, I haven’t decided on it’s true name it, so I doubt it’ll be Tainted Blood in Reality or The Sin’s of a Chief Bandit. I’m still thinking of a name so yeah, please bare with me.]
-Aaru
So you’re saying Aaru didn’t die? That makes no sense.
I didn’t say that, >.>
<.<
lol You’ll just have to see in the sequal and find out. X_X
The Main character died!
Or did she? =P
It’s spelled sequel.
But look at your previous post.
See? Oh, and sorry for double post >.>
i loved ur stories aaru, and am realy sad it ended, am waiting for the next part.
the only thing i can say is make them shorter, it was a pain sitting here reading the long chapters
praise: I like how you describe things and dont rush things [i gotta work on tha myself x.x]
flame: o.0 it gets a bit long but that’s not much of a flame XD. it just takes me a while to read them– but it’s my fault, not yours.
comment: keep on going 😀
~jf~
Mush mush. I loved the ending. It was so sad that it mad me cry. *snif snif* (Yes, I’m a emotional person.)
About the story, is Braven really Aaru’s dad? I was pretty confused because you didn’t really conferm it. xD
nightstar: Yes, Braven is Aaru’s dad although she denies it. She never really heard of her father and/or mother until, in one of the chapters, Braven tells her that she looks like her mother and admits that he is her father.
The story behind that is that Braven, I will not expose his real name, is my Roleplay father from WinMX, and little did I know that he played maplestory too.
So I added him into the story as a side charcter.
Okay, im going to be REAL honest.
It was a great story, though at parts, it started getting mushy. I admit, i like love stories but at parts, it get’s mushy. (that’s just my opnion)
I liked how your story was structured. It had a very depth meaning to it. It wasn’t rushed which i think alot of authors(inlcuding me) are lacking.
I like how you described the people or monsters like for eg(this isn’t what you used) “the bright green, pile of silkist slimy goo” to describe a slime etc,
A really good thing abou you Aaru is that, you would take pride in your work and yourself. I really admire you for that. Some people expect to take 10 minutes and want hundreds of people to read their “so called” good story while other people like Aaru and Jesusfreak and mip and alot more people like to take pride and pleasure.
The way you grabbed the audience’s attenion in each special way. Like you would have the characters nice and quiet and then all of a sudden ACTION. That grabs the audience’s attention.
I enjoyed reading your excellent stories and look forward to more.
~map1eholic~
Map1eholic: Sorry about that, lol, it is a love story after all XD I’m use to writing adult stories so I kept myself in check so that way I wouldn’t write in heavy hardcore XXX details in a poetic kind of way since I know there’s kids on this site and such >.>’ No offence to anyone.
Aaru, i don’t mind love stories, just sometimes it get’s mushy though my stories are like that too. =.=
Totally understandable
Hmm, you had a great start, but then at the end its all about despair and all that stuff. >.> Seriously! Add some other genres to the end o.O Uhm, also upload all of the chapters onto a link for the ppl that haven’t read this. Chapters 1-7 are already eaten.
MatrixPortal: Yeah I know, but I’ll just put all the chapters into a zip file and send it to the person that hasn’t read all of it yet.
Awww she died o.O didnt exept that to happen though nice ending and fire really did deserve to fall to 😛
I really liked it, but yeah the end was all despair and stuff but it was good. It was like realistic and all and you should definitely keep writing x3
Send the zip files to me, so I can read them over later =3 Pretttyyy please? xP
I can really feel the emotion behind it, the feelings, Terrific job <3
im not too much of a fan of long long long chapters. my head feel likes itll blow up,
This story you made, was excellent. I loved the story plot, and Aaru’s traits. Shes not exactly the nicest person, but its original. I’ve been reading most of your stories, and I think the idea of a lost love was nice :D.
Also, the ending was absolutely brilliant! It was depressing that Aaru had died, but it was a nice twist in the story that you don’t see in other stories.
I agree with map1eholic, it gets mushy at times, but not too mushy. . . I guess.
Anyways, you’re a great writer, maybe you can write real stories, and you can win lotsa money :D.
(P.S I like, the Tainted Blood in Reality title better, :D)
Well to tell you the truth it gets mushy kinda poisons people mind like you did to me, Now I’m turning bad oh well I have to fix that problem another thing at the end true it was about despair and affairs and stuff I have to agree it got boring you could add more action to it. Like instead of just thinking about her life and trying to find her long lost bf you could add more action more fighting or something to make it more interesting but it was okay, kinda makes me dizzy lol to long.
i loved the ending =D
made me cry =(
but its awsome.
i like the mushy parts too =D
anyways, ur a great writer, cant wait for the next story
It was a great story, it was very descriptive on how you described where the characters are, the monsters, the surroundings and all. The point of view of the character was detailed as well, I can actually make a picture in my head of what’s happening. I like to read long stories and this is one of the best series I’ve read so far.
Awsome! Is the ‘Sins of a Chief Bandit’ gonna be from Rogue Inez’s point of view?
I don’t like sad endings, but it was really well written. But it was kinda confusing with all the dreams and italic quotes. Did you intend that? But it was really good.
Oh and I missed chapter 5 and 6
Lol, well It was more of a romantic story more so than action so there was little to no fighting.
Yes! I actually intended to put the dreams and the italic parts. The italic quotes come from either Aaru’s thoughts as she says things, or Rogue’s thoughts trying to reach her.
* What good are these hands if I can’t touch you?* implies that Rogue is speaking to Aaru, however she can’t hear what he’s saying.
Sorry for the confusing dreams. Lol. But it had to stay true to the tittle. The dreams actually forshadowed and mislead some things, so it took me a while to wrapp the story around her dreams.
The mushy stuff X_x, again it’s a love story, I have the unrated version, very long chapters.
The ending
Who is to say Aaru Died? O_o o.O >.> I don’t know yet
The sequal, yes, It will be from Rogue Inez’s perspective, inside tip, it’ll start off from the ending of the last chapter. x3
For those who haven’t read all the chapters please send me your email in the MMO Tales mail, I’ll send you the zip up files of the chapters you haven’t read or the whole book (if I dare call it that).
Now o.O Are there any questions XD
-Aaru
Oh, I see. Oki well that clears up that question. =]
I love the stories, although it’s a little bit confusing at some parts.
I didn’t get how aaru and rogue separated at the beginning, and why rogue just dissapeared like that.
My favorite character is Tenan. I was hoping that aaru and tenan would work out their relationship, but it didn’t happen =(
Overall, very well written. Great job
all i like is the action.i’m not 1 for mushy stuff
opps didn’t read the front n err this is a romance story ?0.0 didn’t notice dat